Ah, here I go again. I said I wouldn't give any writing advice but I have something else I wanted to say about it. Forgive me. It's not that I think I really know how to write. I just tend to do it, on occasion.
You've heard that quote attributed to Hemingway? "Write drunk, edit sober?" It's amusing, sure, but I actually try to use it. Well, at least the first half of it...when I'm working on a story. Now I don't mean literally. I'm rarely on a bender when I sit down to pound out a chapter. For starters, I can't afford it, and secondly I'm the kind who loathes a hangover more than even sour weather.
What I take Hemingway's phrase to mean is this. When I'm writing, I try to go for that level of elation you might have when you have been hitting the bottle. Whether you have a social drink now and again or not is likely irrelevant. Even a tea-totaler will get what I'm saying here. You remember those times, I'm sure. Your inhibitions are weakened. You might go and ask someone to dance--even if you never do that. Or, you might share an opinion you know won't be popular. Maybe, here's hoping, you'll try something you've never tried before.
The metaphor is the same when telling your story in novel form. Do all those things when you're writing a scene...or a whole book. Try stuff. Let the cautious 'you' take a holiday. Write like you're drunk. And worry about the editing in the morning.
Hmm...so the party state of mind then. Can't hurt to give it a whirl. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, exactly, Raquel! You really get me. :)
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Funny, Jason. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd totally! There's no harm in letting yourself just go for it mentally! There's always editing in the morning--without the hangover ;) Fun post. :D
Thanks, Mz Morgan!
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I have another writer friend who also endorses this policy ... augmented from time to time with a few glasses of wine. Or gin. She`s awesome, just like you. ;)
ReplyDeleteAww! Thanks for the awesome comment! How nice!
ReplyDeleteI occasionally have tried to get work done while actually drunk. One or two glasses of something is usually okay but I find my mind wanders and I lose the thread of actually producing semi-coherent language on the page if I am snowed under by any more than that. Of course, this topic is more of a conversation starter than a rule of writing. But, I say, whatever gets buts in chairs and fingers on keys is a-okay by me.
Thanks for your comment, Rebellion!
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Hey, if you're doing right, you might even go up to that person of the SAME sex and ask to dance! ;)
ReplyDeleteHa! Marty! Very good point. I was trying to word it to be inclusive but then I mucked it up, didn't I?
ReplyDeleteSo, uh, Marty... May I have this dance?
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Hi Jason, metaphorically this works.
ReplyDeleteIn practice, I've tried to write drunk and can't do it, though I'd hazard a guess that Hemingway actually did.
My drunk writing is unsalvageable gibberish once I sober up and read it.
eden
Eden, I guess the trick is, then, not to sober up.
ReplyDeleteI imagine that Hemingway actually did that part too.
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